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Dexter extra: what do Chayefsky + Dexter have in common?
Scott Meyers @GointotheStory tweeted a vulture interview with Chris Terrio on the toughest scene he had to write in ARGO.
In the interview Terrio references Paddy Chayefsky, whose wiki page states:
Chayefsky was considered one of the most renowned dramatists of the so-called Golden Age of Television. His intimate, realistic scripts provided a naturalistic style of television drama for the 1950s, and he was regarded as the central figure in the “kitchen sink realism” movement of American television. He was a successful writer, the most successful graduate of television’s slice of life school of naturalism.”
Slice of Life made me automatically think of Dexter’s boat.
Could this be coincidence ? Clicking on the wiki link to this school of naturalism we find a further definition:
Slice of life is a phrase describing the use of mundane realism depicting everyday experiences in art and entertainment.
During the 1950s, the phrase had common critical usage in reviews of live television dramas, notably teleplays by Paddy Chayefsky.
The literary term refers to a storytelling technique that presents a seemingly arbitrary sample of a character’s life, which often lacks a coherent plot, conflict, or ending.
In anime and manga, “slice of life” is a genre that often parallels teen melodrama in addition to using slice-of-life narrative techniques.
Oh the irony!
So, the answer to the question ‘What do Dexter and Chayefsky have in common?’ is:
A Slice of Life !
DEXTER part 6: Titles and Meanings
Remember we’re studying Season 7 Episode 7.
The episode is called CHEMISTRY.
In Dexter’s opening lines of dialogue – an internal thought – he tells us:
DEXTER (V.O.)
Chemistry, I've heard some people have it, an attraction that can't be quantified or explained. Is that the reason behind this? Loss of control? Maybe the desire to get Hannah on my table was just a way to deny the affect she has on me.
But what is the affect Hannah has on him? Why did Dexter choose to fuck her instead of kill her?
Perhaps because Hannah is beautiful, but also deadly, just like the flowers she uses to kill, the flowers she is constantly surrounded by – the symbol of her beauty as well as the source of her evil – the perfect rose and its thorn.
The writer takes great care in selecting Hannah’s toxin of choice – from the plant aconitum – also known as aconite (from a Greek word meaning ‘without struggle’). Aconite has been nicknamed ‘the queen of poisons’. Isn’t Hannah Dexter’s queen of poisons ?
The writer not only contrasts chemistry with botany but also compares the healing and destructive potential of both with the healing and destructive potential of Dexter’s relationship with Hannah.
Chemicals and plants can be both medicinal or poisonous – healers or killers.
In Season 7’s main plot which will Dexter and Hannah’s relationship turn out to be – poisonous or medicinal?
And when the entire series’ main plot is tied up in Season 8 which will Dexter eventually be – healed or killed ?
I’ll be looking in greater detail at the dialogue in this opening scene soon.
Read it here: Dexter Season 7 Episode 7: scene 1
The episode scene by scene breakdown can be found here.
Comments welcome.
DEXTER part 5: Screen Time.
In one episode, out of 50 scenes, how many are Dexter in?
- 1.51 Hannah + Dexter (1)
- 2.06 Deb + Sal Price
- 1.24 Hannah + Dexter (2) + 1 extra Biker
- 0.44 Dexter (3) + Hannah
- 1.37 Dexter (4) + Sal Price
- 1.15 LaGuerta + Deb
- 1.39 Dexter (5) + Deb
- 0.33 Dexter (6), Batista and Masuko
- 0.58 LaGuerta, Batista, Masuko, Joey, Deb + Dexter (7)
- 0.9 LaGuerta + Deb
- 0.12 Batista, Joey, Masuko, Dexter (8) + 1 extra Cop
- 0.42 Batista, Joey, Masuko, Dexter (9) + 1 extra Cop
- 0.48 Batista + Joey
- 0.34 Dexter (10) + Deb
- 0.52 Deb + Sal Price
- 0.53 Joey + Nadia
- 0.24 Isaak Sirco, George + Jurg
- 1.14 Deb + Hannah’s dead husband’s sister
- 1.20 Hannah + Price
- 0.12 Price + Dexter (11)
- 0.59 Dexter (12) + his dad.
- 0.58 Joey + George
- 2.51 Dexter (13) + Hannah (MIDPOINT)
- 0.15 Deb + Hannah’s dead husband’s sister
- 0.33 Deb + Lab Technician
- 0.33 Deb + Hannah’s dead husband’s sister
- 1.21 Deb + Price
- 0.34 Hannah + Price
- 1.30 Dexter (14) + Dad
- 2.00 Price + Hannah
- 2.38 Isaak + Dexter (15)
- 2.11 Dexter (16) + Price
- 0.19 Joey + Jamie
- 0.36 Dexter (17) + Batista + Joey
- 1.16 Deb + Dexter (18)
- 0.16 Hannah + Dexter (19)
- 0.12 Dexter (20) + Hannah
- 0.10 Deb + Hannah
- 0.11 Dexter (21) + Hannah
- 1.15 Deb + Hannah
- 0.02 Dexter (22)
- 0.36 Hannah + Deb
- 0.08 Hannah
- 0.04 Dexter (23)
- 3.00 Dexter (24) + Hannah (CLIMAX)
- 0.51 Joey + Batista
- 0.25 Masuko + Deb
- 0.27 Maria LaGuerta
- 0.29 Deb + Hannah’s V.O
- 1.34 Dexter (25) + Hannah + Deb
Exactly half. 25 out of 50.
Exactly 23.06 minutes of screen time – just less than half of the 50 minutes episode.
Read the full scene breakdown here: DEXTER – Season 7 Episode 7
Give him the best.
“Never give your opponent an obviously weak argument. Give him the best, most compelling argument you can.”
– John Truby, ANATOMY OF STORY, p139
Moral Argument
“Moral argument doesn’t mean your hero and opponent appear in the first scene and engage in a verbal argument about morality. Moral argument in a story is an argument of action you make by showing your hero and opponent taking certain means to reach a goal.”
– John Truby, Anatomy of Story (Moral Argument) p 119
DEXTER Part 4: Script Facts.
- Out of 50 scenes, 38 have 2 characters (duologues).
- 2 further scenes have 3 people, but only 2 people actually talk (duologue).
- Scene 49 is 1 character reacting to another character’s Voice on tape (duologue).
- So, actually 41 out of 50 scenes are duologues!
- 3 scenes have 1 character and are less than 10 seconds.
- ONLY 1 full scene has just 1 character & sets up the MAIN PLOT (27 secs).
- 2 scenes have 3 talking characters.
- 2 scenes have 5 characters.
- 1 scene has 6 characters.
- The Midpoint scene is a discussion on the nature of murder.
Read the full scene by scene breakdown here:
DEXTER Part 3: Characters in Scenes
Here is a list of scenes, their length and which characters are in each scene.
The first character is often the one driving the scene, but not always.
Check out who dominates the sequence of scenes building up to the Climax – the two most important women in Dexter’s life: Deb and Hannah.
Season 7 Episode 7:
- 1.51 Hannah + Dexter
- 2.06 Deb + Sal Price
- 1.24 Hannah + Dexter + 1 extra Biker
- 0.44 Dexter + Hannah
- 1.37 Dexter + Sal Price
- 1.15 LaGuerta + Deb
- 1.39 Dexter + Deb
- 0.33 Dexter, Batista and Masuko
- 0.58 LaGuerta, Batista, Masuko, Joey, Deb + Dexter
- 0.9 LaGuerta + Deb
- 0.12 Batista, Joey, Masuko, Dexter + 1 extra Cop
- 0.42 Batista, Joey, Masuko, Dexter + 1 extra Cop
- 0.48 Batista + Joey
- 0.34 Dexter + Deb
- 0.52 Deb + Sal Price
- 0.53 Joey + Nadia
- 0.24 Isaak Sirco, George + Jurg
- 1.14 Deb + Hannah’s dead husband’s sister
- 1.20 Hannah + Price
- 0.12 Price + Dexter
- 0.59 Dexter + his dad.
- 0.58 Joey + George
- 2.51 Dexter + Hannah (MIDPOINT)
- 0.15 Deb + Hannah’s dead husband’s sister
- 0.33 Deb + Lab Technician
- 0.33 Deb + Hannah’s dead husband’s sister
- 1.21 Deb + Price
- 0.34 Hannah + Price
- 1.30 Dexter + Dad
- 2.00 Price + Hannah
- 2.38 Isaak + Dexter
- 2.11 Dexter + Price
- 0.19 Joey + Jamie
- 0.36 Dexter + Batista + Joey
- 1.16 Deb + Dexter
- 0.16 Hannah + Dexter
- 0.12 Dexter + Hannah
- 0.10 Deb + Hannah
- 0.11 Dexter + Hannah
- 1.15 Deb + Hannah
- 0.02 Dexter
- 0.36 Hannah + Deb
- 0.08 Hannah
- 0.04 Dexter
- 3.00 Dexter + Hannah (CLIMAX)
- 0.51 Joey + Batista
- 0.25 Masuko + Deb
- 0.27 Maria LaGuerta
- 0.29 Deb + Hannah’s V.O
- 1.34 Dexter + Hannah + Deb
Read the full scene breakdown here: DEXTER – Season 7 Episode 7
DEXTER Part 2: Structure and Scene Length
So what can we learn from the scene by scene breakdown of our favorite serial killer?
5 interesting points:
- The episode is 52 minutes long.
- There are 50 scenes in total.
- Only 5 scenes are over 2 minutes long.
- These longer scenes pinpoint the major turning points (scene 2: set-up, scene 23: midpoint, scenes 30,31, 32: Act 2 Turning Point + scene 45: Climax.
- The longest scene is 3 minutes and is the Climax.
Here is a list of scenes and their length (Season 7 Episode 7). Notice a structure?
- 1.51
- 2.06
- 1.24
- 0.44
- 1.37
- 1.15
- 1.39
- 0.33
- 0.58
- 0.9
- 0.12
- 0.42
- 0.48
- 0.34
- 0.52
- 0.53
- 0.24
- 1.14
- 1.20
- 0.12
- 0.59
- 0.58
- 2.51 (MIDPOINT)
- 0.15
- 0.33
- 0.33
- 1.21
- 0.34
- 1.30
- 2.00
- 2.38
- 2.11
- 0.19
- 0.36
- 1.16
- 0.16
- 0.12
- 0.10
- 0.11
- 1.15
- 0.02
- 0.36
- 0.08
- 0.04
- 3.00 LONGEST SCENE + CLIMAX
- 0.51
- 0.25
- 0.27
- 0.28
- 1.34
Notice the 3 Act structure ?
Look at the scene lengths from Act 1 through to the Midpoint (scene 23) – quite short right?
Then we’ve got the Midpoint scene – a big important dialogue between Dexter and his lover Hannah on the nature of murder – which lasts almost 3 mins.
Then, from the Midpoint, scenes 24 through 29 are a series of short scenes until –
– the Act 2 Turning Point (comprising of 3 scenes: 30,31 + 32) which are all 2 mins +
Then, look at the length of scenes building up from the opening of Act 3 until the Climax – scenes 33 through 44 –
– eleven short sharp scenes just a few seconds long until BANG – the explosive Climax – 3 minutes – the longest scene in the episode – Dexter V Hannah OR Hero V Antagonist – 3 whole minutes of sheer high-voltage intense emotional drama!
Then, to wind us down, 5 mid-length scenes of the Resolution (between 0.25 and 1.34 in length) to resolve the episode and set up the next.
Brilliant writing, and tightly structured – especially note the short sharp scenes leading us to the explosive Climax.
Read the general scene breakdown here: DEXTER – Season 7 Episode 7
DEXTER Part 1: Scene by Scene
Welcome to my series of posts on DEXTER – The Crafting of an Episode – where we’ll be analyzing one episode in detail over the coming weeks.
The objective? To arm ourselves to write awesome television!
The episode we’re looking at is Season 7 Episode 7.
Please watch first as this analysis will contain SPOILERS!
I’ve begun by listing the scenes in numerical order including scene length,a short description of what happens and the number of characters.
What’s surprised me the most so far is how many scenes have 2 characters. Most scenes.
Feel free to take a quick look at the breakdown and comment.
In future weeks we’ll analyze in much more detail, scene by scene. We’ll look at characters, plots and subplots, action and dialogue, use of subtext, story world, motifs, goals, needs, morals and theme.
Here’s the scene by scene breakdown: DEXTER – Season 7 Episode 7
Hold tight – it’s gonna be a breathtaking ride!






