So, what else should we take away from this scene-by-scene breakdown?

First, let’s determine how many scenes our two protagonists are in (or, perhaps more importantly, not in).

Like Criminal Minds, and the UK’s Silent Witness, the opener is the crime to be solved.

Next, we head straight to Scully’s recruitment by the FBI – her task: to investigate Mulder.

Her task set, Scully meets Mulder. They are then in every scene EXCEPT an exterior cutaway of their car driving along the road (scene 8) until the commercial break.

(This must have been written in a time when writers had to leave a cliffhanger before the commercial break). It happens here between scene 16 and 17.

Then, it’s Scully and Mulder again until another car cutaway in scene 20.

Scene 23 is 11 seconds of words being typed by Scully on a computer screen.

Scene 27 is 5 seconds of a mysterious man loitering outside Scully’s motel room.

Then, it’s Scully / Mulder right through until Scully reports back to the FBI suits in scene 39.

I suggest the next 3 scenes are the resolution:

Scene 40 – Scully wonders who the Strange Man is at the FBI.

Scene 41 – Scully takes a call from Mulder while in bed.

Scene 42 – the Strange Man at FBI revealed to be a storeroom clerk at the Pentagon

So, in conclusion, Scully and Mulder are in a total of 32 of the 42 scenes together.

(Of those 32 scenes, 19 scenes are only Scully and Mulder and 13 involve other characters).

Scully and Mulder are absent from 7 scenes.

Of those 7 scenes:

2 scenes are the crime opener

2 scenes are exterior cutaways

1 scene is words being typed on a screen by Scully, and

2 are mysterious men.

Scully is in a total of 5 scenes without Mulder.

Scully has 1 scene alone.

Stay tuned for the next post when we will step outline the episode.

As module 3 of the MA Writing for Script and Screen is to write a step outline, treatment and character breakdown of a rebooted X files, here is a breakdown of the original pilot, including number of scenes, scene lengths, location and characters.

The first thing to note is the ouroboros nature, the mythological snake with its tail in its mouth – a technique taught in many a creative writing class – meaning simply a circular shape to the episode.

In scene 3, Scully is given a task – report on Mulder’s investigations. In scene 39, Scully fulfills her task and reports back. Scully achieves her goal.

Stay tuned for the next post analysing the X-Files pilot.

So, I’m reading Sid Field’s seminal book SCREENPLAY – The Foundations of Screenwriting. Sid makes a distinction between what he calls the ‘key incident’ and the ‘inciting incident’.

On p35, Sid says this:

“In Mystic River, the inciting incident is in the past, when Dave (Tim Robbins) was abducted by the two perverts; it sets the story in motion and leads to the ‘key’ incident: the discovery of Jimmy’s (Sean Penn’s) murdered daughter.”

Then, two paragraphs later, Sid writes:

“Sometimes the key incident will be something that has affected your character’s life at an earlier time, as in Mystic River.“

But wait a minute, Sid just said the earlier life event in Mystic River is the ‘inciting incident.’ Now it’s the ‘key incident.’

Ironically, on p36, Sid writes:

“When you begin writing your screenplay it’s essential that you know the distinctions between the inciting incident and the key incident.”

But Sid, haven’t you just confused the key incident and inciting incident yourself?

We can also note that there are three families with major storylines: The Taylors, The Carters, and The Mitchells. However, The Pansars and The Foxes have one scene each, too.

It is my understanding that there are 5 storylines in this episode:

Chelsea Fox

Tommy Mitchell

Keegan Taylor

Kheerat Panesar

Mick and Shirley Carter.

Notice that like the episode previously studied, this episode has 20 scenes.

How many storylines are there in this episode?

We might say that there are four storylines.

1. The Carters – characters: Mick, Nancy, Frankie, Shirley, Janine
2. Gray and Chelsea – characters: Gray, Chelsea, Kathy, Kim
3. Zack and Nancy – characters: Zack and Nancy.
4. Mitch & Karen – characters: Keegan, Mitch, Bailey, Karen, Rita.

MA Writing for Script & Screen 1:2:6 (Year 1 Module 2 Week 6)

Well, what a week. Very difficult to focus on this MA with the horror of the invasion of Ukraine. In way, though, it’s made me even more determined to write a good project, this term, because life is precious, and no tyrant like Vladimir Putin should be able to steal our love of culture and art.

So, on I press.

Also, having worked so hard on the video pitch assignment submitted in week 5, I need a little time to shift to the next phase of the process – treatment, outline and script.

Last night I went to a private screening of No Time to Die with a Q & A with Barbara Broccoli and some British members of the sound and visual effects team. I had seen it before. But after this screening at the Soho Hotel, I’ll never go to see a movie at my local picture house ever again – such was the difference in sound and visual quality of this small, private audience movie theatre.

I also couldn’t help realizing how relevant this espionage thriller was. If only MI6 did have a nanobot – a biomolecular DNA targeting lethal virus that can move through human bodies, harming no one, until it reaches its intended target.

But what about my short film project. I was pleased with the pitch. I wrote it, rewrote it, memorised it and practised it, and finally, after 200 or so takes, submitted what I thought was an OK version. Most importantly of all, I never broke eye contact with the camera. As a classical actor, perfection of words is paramount – and because I hadn’t memorised the pitch as exact as I would a Shakespeare piece, I suffered and kept slipping up. If I had taken longer perfecting the memorisation, I probably could have delivered it in one take. Still, it was my first pitch, and overall I was pleased with it. Lesson learned.

Next steps: rework the treatment and step outline. I’m a firm believer that the form of the short film should be as visual as possible, and we should tell the story without words as much as possible. This project, called Piano, will have a strong focus on audio as it centres around a jingle composer.

Most of the writing, so far, is taking place in my head.

Where is your writing taking place at the moment? And how is the Ukraine situation affecting you?

MA Writing for Script & Screen: Year 1 Module 2 Week 5

This week was pitch assignment week. Having delivered my pitch for my romcom to my tutor, I received feedback which forced me to learn defining qualities of other dramas.

What I mean is, I’d pitched it as a romcom, for which I’d learned and memorised the necessary defining qualities.

However, my tutor suggested my story might actually be a personal drama as the romcom shares screen time between the two central characters, whereas my story seemed to weight slightly more in favour of the male. I suggested that Notting Hill (1999 dir. Roger Michell, screenplay by Richard Curtis) follows the male story and screen time is probably slightly more balanced in favor of the male there as well. Although my tutor agreed he still felt the personal drama might give me more ‘space to breathe.’

So, I returned to Phil Parker’s genre breakdowns and realised my story has defining qualities of three genres: the personal ‘inner’ drama, the romantic drama, and the romcom.

This led me to wondering what comes first, the genre or the story?

Should a writer write the story first, and then see which genre/s fit? Or should we decide on a genre/s and write the story to fit the defining qualities of the drama?

The ol’ chicken egg question.

What do you think? Which comes first, the story or the genre?